I will discuss on how my email essay has evolved and differentiated wen i first started and how every single help that i got contributed to my essay. My first draft looks like a mess when i look at it today, it is a very big difference and it has taught me a lot about writing passages. The hardest part was setting an appointment for the writing center, it was a challenge because many people also think that the writing center is a big help and a line is there just to revise over papers. That was a challenge and an experience for so i can better prepare myself in the future. Mainly all of the hard part was the meeting for the revising and trying to get the best draft possible.
Now it looks way different than it used to, it looks smart, simple and easy to follow without loosing interest. A very big help that appointment was and very insightful the instructors were. Hopefully in the future i will prepare so that i can look forward to a meeting to further my knowledge and learn new ways to expand my editing and revising for a better paper. That is usually all i got to say it was a very learning experience, i should definitely invite people whenever they have questions or doubts or who just want suggestions on how to better an essay.
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well angel I agree with you about the writing center challenge. It was one of the hardest thing to do. But I happy to know that you relize the difference between the e-mail that you send to your friend and the one you send to your teacher. Let me tell you that I also had a hard time trying to find an appoinment in the writing center. After all of those things a learned something very important and I am telling you this because I need you to learned it too. If we want to have an appoinment in the writing center we need to be there like two weeks before our paper is due.
ReplyDeleteAngel your blog is good, but your still needed a lot of ideas, you sould use the spelling and grammar check, because your are using the massage, that the teracher said, she don't want us to use, in other words, your ideas are conncted, but the same problem still. The main point is clear and I really like the form of your writing, I have seen your other blog, but I think those are good enought for a four, I had never gave a comment to another people, and I don't really like to be so roof with the people, but in this time is good for you that somebody else tell you about the text massage thingies, because the teacher is going to look for it. in this blog you are very specific, I don't know if you have the 300 and somethings words, but remember the more we have is better for the teacher, she doesn't want less, she want the minimum or more, that' s all what I have to say about your blog I hope my comment help you to make it better and be sucessful in those assignments, att: Ana
ReplyDeleteHola, Hey you now I know to go to the writting center evrey time I need help with anything, not just for editing my papers.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job letting people know about how hard is to get a appointment in the writting center. That is way you have to make time to be able to go because you never get an appointment that suts your needs. One thing that I did not understand is whene you mention you paper to be smart. How did it look smart did it? but you also mention that the instructurs are very helpfull and meet your needs. Now all the people that read this Blog are going to think diffrently.