reflecting todays experience

Today were put in partners and were asked to discuss our paper. The teacher Ms. Crawford required us to make a timeline describing every part of our vlog, she made us do like an organizer for our ideas and put them together from the smallest detail to the main point of this whole essay. The method she used was a very interesting one and enlightenment to the whereabouts of how to start of the essay, it provided tips and tools to better detail our written report. We used every kind of detail that was given in the video to make clear everything that surrounds the subject on the vlog. Everything from what he wears to the sound in his place and especially how he sounded in his video, what he wore and the issue he was talking about. The technique the teacher showed helped me a lot organizing my thoughts onto my essay and my partner’s help were very handy in fact I helped with her paper that she needed too. Her advice was just as good as mine that we need to add more details and make the story more comprehensible without losing touch of the main topic; we basically just took our ideas to another direction in writing and not to bore with uninteresting ideas to make it seem interesting in the subject we are about to write. The knowledge that was given to us was a very helpful piece and I will be forward to using this method in my paper in hopes to create a better essay to a better grade in my course in English.